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OC review: Insomnia by emthereviewer, literature

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OC review: Insomnia

OC review: Insomnia Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or anyone who so

Opinion on: People with OCs by emthereviewer, literature

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Opinion on: People with OCs

Opinion on: People with OCs Disclamer Any copyrighted content included in the following challenges are used under the fair use law for educational porpoises. Nothing mentioned in these challenged is meant to offend and does not promote that harassment of any one person or group of individuals. Find more reviews, ideas and my less edited though on my Tumblr,emthereviewer Introduction I pulled this from my main DA as I believe it's time I had a clear out but I thought this is very important. I could talk endlessly about this topic in reviews and how to's but I think that this is still the best thing I've written regarding this topic. What's

OC Review: David Becker by emthereviewer, literature

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OC Review: David Becker

OC review: David Becker Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or anyone wh

How to Horror: twins and siblings by emthereviewer, literature

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How to Horror: twins and siblings

How to Horror: twins and siblings Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. The following is simply a louse suggest on how to use horror themes and is by no way a guide line which must be followed at all costs, there are always variables! Find more reviews, ideas and my less edited though on my Tumblr,emthereviewer Introduction One way or another, we've all heard of the "twins are creepy" trope in horror films, form the blue dressed girls the end of the hall way in "the shining" to any of the many creepy reimaganingis of the "alice in wonderland" story, Tweedy-dee

OC review: Thomas le Mime by emthereviewer, literature

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OC review: Thomas le Mime

OC review: Thomas le Mime Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or anyone

How to Horror: Motives for murder by emthereviewer, literature

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How to Horror: Motives for murder

How to Horror: Motives for murder Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. The following is simply a louse suggest on how to use horror themes and is by no way a guide line which must be followed at all costs, there are always variables! Find more reviews, ideas and my less edited though on my Tumblr,emthereviewer !!WARNING!! This tutorial talks about fetiches and real life murder cases, triggers ahead !!WARNING!! Introduction This how to had been a long time comings. I always notice, with new OCs, is that they either have no good motive for killing or they are

OC review: Key Keeper by emthereviewer, literature

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OC review: Key Keeper

OC review: Key Keeper Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or anyone who

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How to Horror:Cliches in writing n' world building by emthereviewer, literature

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How to Horror:Cliches in writing n' world building

How to Horror:Cliches in writing n' world building Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. The following is simply a louse suggest on how to use horror themes and is by no way a guide line which must be followed at all costs, there are always variables! Find more reviews, ideas and my less edited though on my Tumblr,emthereviewer Oh, I want to give a second disclaimer here to; during this How To Horror I'll be referring to multiple crappypasta and some creepypasta. The stories I'll be referring to will be linked where used; I do not promote or indirect the slande

OC review: Mama by emthereviewer, literature

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OC review: Mama

OC review: Mama Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or anyone who so hap

OC review: The Crimson Reaper by emthereviewer, literature

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OC review: The Crimson Reaper

OC review: The Crimson Reaper Disclamer Any copyrighted content used in this review is used under the "Fair Use" law for commentary and Criticism. Any OC appearing in these reviews serves as a way of learning how to refine charters and in no way works to promote harassing creators. Please do not harass any artiest, writer or creator used in these reviews. I know, and understand, it is every hard to make any kind of good horror charter but from what I've learnt I'd like to share with you what I think could help turn a good OC into an amazing one. These ideas and traits that I suggest can be accepted, refined or rejected by the creator or any

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How to Create a Glitch/Cybernetic Creepypasta OC by KomradApex, literature

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How to Create a Glitch/Cybernetic Creepypasta OC

How to Create a Glitch/Cybernetic Creepypasta OC Bonjourno! It’s been a while since I did one of these pasta guide things, which only means it’s high time I got my butt in gear and made another. In this one I’ll be talking about a type of OC which a lot of people don’t like, but which I do firmly believe can be done well: the “glitch” OC. I’ll be covering the “cybernetic” OC type as well, because this is a really cool kind of character that I’m surprised isn’t more popular. If you’ve never heard of that character, think a person who is partially mechanical whether by acc

Creepypasta OC for Dummies: Design Tips by InvaderIka, literature

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Creepypasta OC for Dummies: Design Tips

Original Series (c) KomradApex (https://www.deviantart.com/komradapex) c: ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ TOPIC: Design Tips/ Inspiration from Research. Now I wanted to add my little chapter in this to further help Deviants new to the vast Creepypasta fandom and need help creating a Creepypasta character for themselves or want to further tips to make their already created OCs unique. We will be going through some subtopics under this: How to make a character believable with a physical or mental illness through research.How to design a character's clothes based off of time factor or backgroundHow a person raised in a different era would probably speak and act differently due to o

Ika's Tips for Newcomers to Creepypasta: OCs by InvaderIka, journal

Ika's Tips for Newcomers to Creepypasta: OCs

Jun 3, 2014

So, I have been asked how Ally has been spreading around DA (like wildfire in my eyes xD) and how she became well-known, has so much fanart etc. So, to help those old and new to the fandom and want to spread their OC around DA such I have (mainly with Ally and my other OCs), I have tips to help you get started. These are mainly my own opinion and techniques and shouldn't be revered xD Ok, here we go! Ask around if anyone is doing ATs, commissions or requests. If someone is open- ask them if they will draw your OC. (Most of the art I've gotten is commissions i requested or Art trades! x3) Write, draw, refine your OC! xD Drawing your OC gi

Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies by KomradApex, literature

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Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies

Creating an Original Creepypasta OC for Dummies So, you’ve probably seen all the awesome OCs floating around on DA. You may have heard that creepypasta OCs are hard to create. That’s not true at all, and I’ll show you why in a bit. Or maybe you received criticism for an earlier OC of yours. Well, even if your character is in fact poorly designed, all legitimate art is still art. So while you shouldn’t ignore constructive criticism, you shouldn’t listen to the haters. I’ve noticed most of those people don’t even do art at all and just troll the forums and insult shippings that aren’t their perso

Creating a Non-Human Creepypasta OC for Dummies by KomradApex, literature

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Creating a Non-Human Creepypasta OC for Dummies

Creating a Non-Human Creepypasta OC for Dummies Alright, we’re back for round two on making a pasta OC. In my initial guide (which you can read in the link below) I tried to provide the foundations for making a good pasta OC. Assuming that the foundations to the building were for a house so your pastas had someplace nice to live in, let’s add a backyard pool and a second floor to that house. By which I mean let’s talk about an important aspect of making characters interesting as well as making interesting characters: non-human OCs. Since “non-human” is a pretty broad term, we’ll divide it into three common

How to Avoid Making Your Creepypasta OC a Mary Sue by KomradApex, literature

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How to Avoid Making Your Creepypasta OC a Mary Sue

How to Avoid Making Your Creepypasta OC a Mary Sue For this part of my continuing series on making a quality OC, we’re going to talk about the most dreaded two words for any serious author: “Mary Sue”, or “Gary Stu” as it’s called for male characters. What is a Mary Sue? Different people seem to have different definitions but there is one in particular I am familiar with, and the one most often found in creepypasta Mary Sues. This is the type that is basically the author, only cooler, sexier, and always quick with a bad punchline when they kill someone, with more friends than the author does but still oh

How to Give Your Creepypasta OC a Good Backstory by KomradApex, literature

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How to Give Your Creepypasta OC a Good Backstory

How to Give Your Creepypasta OC a Good Backstory Howdy to all my fellow pastamakers! Not the food kind, the other kind. Anyway, in this particular guide I thought I’d share what advice I can on creating a proper backstory for your OC. I’ve noticed that there are a lot of great OCs out there who are missing a background on how they came to be and why they do what they do. Creating an origin story for your OC is as important in my opinion as giving them a memorable appearance and personality. There's one model in particular I use for my once-human character, but you can follow it too if you so wish. It includes a set-up that descr

Creating Interactions Between Creepypasta OC's by KomradApex, literature

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Creating Interactions Between Creepypasta OC's

Creating Interactions between Creepypasta OC's Hello to all you out there in the creepypasta community! In this continuation of my guides on pasta creation, we’ll be talking about making your own fancanon for both official characters and your own OC’s. Or your own pastaverse, as it were. Basically, I’ve noticed that a lot of people create a good OC that may even have a good story. Problems occur, however, when the topic of how their own characters fit in with the other pastas they interact with comes up. First off, I should mention that a lot of people, particularly many traditionalists, dislike the idea of their OC’

Some Do's And Don'ts When Writing a Creepypasta by KomradApex, literature

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Some Do's And Don'ts When Writing a Creepypasta

Some Do’s and Don’ts when Writing a Creepypasta Good evening or whatever time it is when you read this, my fellow Pastanians. I’ve written quite a few guides on how to create a creepypasta OC that I hope you’ve found helpful. However, I haven’t written as much on how to write an actual creepypasta story. I know there are plenty of people who want to write stories with their own OC’s, those belonging to other people, or just about creepy stuff in general. So I’ll be breaking down three things you shouldn’t do and three things you should do for all ya’ll. I’m gonna quote my good frien

Creating A Hybrid Creepypasta OC by KomradApex, literature

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Creating A Hybrid Creepypasta OC

Creepypasta for Dummies: Creating a Hybrid Creepypasta OC Greeting and salutations, fellow Pastanians. Today we’ll be looking into creating an interesting type of creepypasta OC which you’ve probably run into before, even if you didn’t know it: the “hybrid” model of OC. “What is a hybrid?”, I’m sure you’re wondering. Well, a hybrid is essentially an OC which blends elements from several different types of character templates. In recognition of the fact that ~InvaderIka (https://www.deviantart.com/invaderika) gave me the inspiration for this guide and ideas for the content, we’ll use a hybrid character of hers in the

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This is the review account of the deviant ObsoleteGoat. On this page, I post reviews on all kinds of horror based OCs. anything said on this account is my own opinion; this account serves to help others, not offend. please send me a PM on my main account if you wish for an OC to be reviewed.

I'm sometimes joined by other reviewers to help me reviewing.

!!WARNING!! my first language is not English, anyone who comments about bad grammar and spelling will have their comments hidden !!WARNING!!

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emthereviewer

Nov 14, 2016

Recently, I've been seeing a lot more original OCs in the creepypasta/horror community, good work guys!

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emthereviewer

Oct 7, 2016

I'd like to remind people that, even though I'm not very active here anymore, I am more than happy to help any user craft and refine their OC if they want my help. Feel free to send me a note on my main account, @emthesmall, if you have any questions...

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Jul 2, 2015

reviews (how to ask for them)

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So, how do you request help? It's simple rearly. Simple go to my main account (ObsoleteGoat (https://www.deviantart.com/obsoletegoat)), send me a note with the topic "E.T.R help", and link inside any available reference sheets and stories (origin stories). You can only send me one OC, I don't have time to review all of a person's 658794 OCs for every person I do. Same goes for re-writes; call the note "E.T.R write" and link the pasta (doesn't need to be yours) telling me what needs to be improved. Finally, if you want me to do a how to guide on any aspect of OC design or law send me a note with the title "E.T.R howto" with the subject of you choice, you don't need to provide links her